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Thursday, December 16, 2010

Broken Heart


One tempestuous evening, driving in his car, he got struck by thunder
He found the same old lahori passenger, rest all is explicated as under/mentioned below

He asked
Hey smasher, can you accompany me in my car?
 I’ll narrate you a story! its about you, my red face & scar

She sits&
He instigated as follows hoping she remembered the plight
Sojourner’s Truth revealed,
It was an orchestrated Robotic crime
You got to be serious,
burping about Machiavelli pantomime


It all started with chitter
People discerned it as twitter
They gabbed about their better half
He trespassed, they all started to laugh
Jesting, jolting, smattering it was fun
Till things got serious, they had to run
They blogged about him,
at least that’s what he thought
Its euphemism my friend,
they were bludgeoning you with bots
Shackled with twitter,
hypnotized with the trauma,
Firedrake he became,
waiting for their BlogSpot Persona
Inane, heedless, susceptible he was
Endowing his love, though they were all dross
If they were right, and he took them wrong
They could have elucidated, with an encomiastic song
Oh my hoi polloi, you should have at least listen
Was he Viky-leak Julian? Who can’t be forgiven!!

Final Exchange before he dropped the passenger

I won’t forgive you for what you did,
If you were not serious, than why did you opened the lid ?

Suggestion from a Friend on describing the whole story

I'll never sink through your quicksand of charm
I maybe dreamy but I'm hard headed too
I'll never make the mistake of letting loose and falling for you

PS: This is written in account of real life incident happened with a guy who fell in love(one sided only) with girl on social networking website who betrayed him

However, this only entails view, from one side only




4 comments:

  1. ahahhah...poor you...poorer girl =P Interesting read!

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  2. sad :( id say people shouldn't talk about others if they don't mean to ever talk to them...to think it all began with blogging about that guy...that was very wrong...

    the girl should apologize and the guy should forget her...

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  3. i know you were trying to get the message out there however there is something inadequate with the execution part of it. i believe the imagery is rather generalized and not as aesthetically built well enough to be easily digested. i appreciate the vastness of your vocabulary. kudos for that. however, one must remember that it's not all about that. i am new to your blog by the way. i will see more of your writings in a while. on the side note, the girl was wicked. but may she realize that the soonest possible.

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